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My face is a mirror to the horror I saw upon you,
because once upon a time you used to say " I Love You".

Now I know I promised I'd always tell the truth,
but to your sender I lied in my moment of truth.

I'll never forgive myself, this I know he can see,
because in those words he killed a part of me.

I know this is something that shouldn't be asked,
but I have to know what was your task?

If you were to make me cry let me know,
because then I have a perfectly good reason to put him on death row.

I need to calm down though because it isn't that serious,
so I'll wipe away a few of these tears maybe I'm just delirious.

Doing a little bit of brain-work,
I look at you and I smirk because now I can finally see what a jerk he has grown to be.
©2005-2009 ~Staind-Tearz
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poem i wrote in reading class...um it's a letter not like a letter like A
but like dear blah blah you know ? Yeah...I'm not realy in the mood to explain it all
but it gives you a good idea of what im talking about.
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Steal and die! No usage is permitted! Staind-Tearz©

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This is great work. I understood the question, "but I have to know what was your task?" Sometimes we wonder if a relationship was started as a personal quest or because of an attraction between two people.
Many times we discover that it was a one sided attraction and the other person just wanted sex and not a relationship or even a friendship for Christ sakes.
I hope your teacher gave you an A. (I taught high school for 16 years. I'll give you an A. I would give you a trophy too, but I'm new here. lol) :D
Keep on putting those emotions on paper. I would submit this for publishing in your school newspaper.

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Let the Remnant Unite!!
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Thnx I'm glade you enjoyed it so much xD School newspaper ? lol my school is to poor to have a newspaper (sad thing is i go to a prep school) but if we had one i would try to put it in there :) :hug:

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